Ashley wrote a scene than brings us back to the four characters at the start and helps transition into the next scene. I like it because it is simple for the children to follow and keeps them engaged.
Intro between little Red too Goldilocks
(Meg closes the book and looks up at Toby, Tom and Freya)
Meg: Now wasn’t that a good story boys and girls? Didn’t we all have loads of fun listening to this story?
Tom: it was the best story I have ever heard in my whole life!
Toby: that story was so amazing, little Red Riding Hood is my favourite story and you told it so well!
Freya: (not full of much energy) it was nice.
Meg: Nice? Did you not enjoy this fairy tale? You said it was your favourite when I started to read it to you.
Freya: yeah I know but then I remembered that I liked another fairy tale EVEN MORE then Little Red Riding Hood!
(Overlapping)
Toby: NO WAY, nothings better than Little Red Riding Hood.
Tom: No story that I know could be better than Little Red Riding Hood, It’s the best story EVER!
Freya: Yeah there is, my mum told me the story a couple of nights ago and it’s SO much better!
(Overlapping and improvise a childish fight)
Tom: Stop lying nothing is better!
Toby: Little Red is Funny, Amazing, Fun, Great…
Freya: My mummy said that my story is the best she had ever heard!
Meg: (To Toby) Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Toby: (To Freya) Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Freya: (To Tom) Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Tom: (To Audience) Shhhhhhhhhhhh!
Meg: Would you like to share your story with all of us then
Freya: Oh can I, Thank you sooooo much!.... (She goes to speak then realises) I don’t remember it.
Meg: Have a look through the big book of Fairy tales and see if you can find it
Freya: Found it!
(Overlapping)
Toby: Oh my god! That is a great story.
Tom: Oh please read us the story.
Meg: Go ahead.
Freya: Thank you so very much. Once upon a time
Intro between Goldilocks too Jack and the Beanstalk
Freya: Seeeeeee, wasn’t that the best story you have ever heard.
Meg: Yes that was lovely and I think it’s a good story to end on we can do more stories tomorrow…
(At the same time)
Toby: (huff of air)
Tom: (huff of air
Meg: Are you two alright?
Toby: Yeah I guess
Tom: It’s just that, you got to tell a story… She got to tell a story…
Freya: Do you guys want to tell a story to me.
Toby: Oh yes please
Tom: Can we, Can we
Meg: I’m not sure, maybe...
Tom: Please it’s in the Big Book of Fairy Tales, I saw it earlier.
Meg: Well…
(Overlapping and improvised
Toby: Oh please let us
Freya: Can they, can they
Tom: We won’t take long
Meg: (To Toby) Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Toby: (To Freya) Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Freya: (To Tom) Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Tom: (To Audience) Shhhhhhhhhhhh!
Meg: You both can’t tell the story.
Toby: Yes we can, its Jack and the Beanstalk so I will narrate the story with my (Narration voice for Jack and Beanstalk) Narrators voice.
Tom: And I can be Jack
Freya: That sound like loads of fun, please let them tell their story
Meg: Very well you can tell your story
Toby: Thank you, this is going to be loads of fun
Tom: It’s okay Miss you’re in the story as well, you can be the Cow I trade away.
Meg: What!
(Overlapping, Toby’s voice is more powerful then Megs)
Toby: Once apon a time in a place far away
Meg: (Getting over shadowed by Toby’s voice) No wait I don’t want to be cow