Romeo Monologue Update

After performing to the class and listening to the notes and ideas of my classmates, I have made adjustments to my performance. I have added a lot more sarcasm in the piece so I bring out the teenage complaining that should be with Romeo. I have also brought in more melt moments where he is talking about Juliet so there is more of a flow and a roller coaster ride of emotion, which was one of suggestion that I strongly took on board. I feel that while I perform this with anger my eye contact will shift to a range of people and the camera where as while I'm being sarcastic I will hold eye contact with the camera. However, while I'm talking about Juliet my eyes will drift off as I dreamily think of her. I don't think I will move around much, I will only march straight up to the camera as I say "Tis torture not mercy" then I will remain planted firmly on the ground and only move my attention to different people.